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写作篇 第八期

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写作篇 第八期

节目内容:商务英语写作语言手法与写作技巧等 节目时间:每周五

语言手法 具体准确的描述

在描写事务时要做到具体准确(Precise Deions),切忌抽象空洞。例如:“The room's floor area is 120 square meters.”和 “The room is rather big.”两句相比,前者描写具体准确,而后者则显得空洞。再举下面几对例句: (1) Congratulations on your recent honor. 祝贺您最近所得到的荣誉。(笼统)

Congratulations on your selection as outstanding salesperson of the year. 祝贺您当选本年度的最佳推销员。(具体)

(2) We have raised many anti-dumping suits against foreign exporters in the first half of this year.

今年上半年我们已向外国出口商提出了许多反倾销诉讼。(笼统)

We have till now launched as many as 30 anti-dumping suits against foreign exporters.

到现在为止我们已向外国出口商提出了多达三十起诉讼。(具体)

(3) Recently the manufacturing company has experienced quite a few problems. 这家厂商最近遇到了不少的问题。(笼统)

The manufacturing company has recently experienced three problems: absenteeism, tardiness, and alcoholism.

这家厂商最近遇到三个问题:缺勤,拖沓和酗酒。(具体)

接下来,我们来做一些相关的练习,好好把学到的知识巩固下吧~

阅读完下面短文后,判断相关的statements是具体(precise)还是不具体(imprecise):

Berta is a very economical photocopier with very low service requirement. We can safely say that it has the copying facilities of much larger machines. Yet it is compact, lightweight and extremely stylish. For example, it weighs only 22 kg and its overall dimensions are 74 cm × 43 cm × 21 cm. There are no sheet

handling problems with the machine because the paper is loaded in cassettes of 100 sheets, The time for the first copy is only 11.4 seconds. All in all, Berta is a reliable machine and good value for money.

Statement 1) Economy

2) Service requirements

3) Comparison with large machines 4) Weight 5) Size

6) Paper Handling 7) First copy speed 8) Reliability and value

参考答案,回复可见~ ------------------ 回复可见内容

1) imprecise 2) imprecise 4) precise 5) precise 7) precise 8) imprecise

6) precise 3) imprecise

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