雅思写作剖析 思维模式(一)

下面我们先介绍第一种改变思维模式的雅思写作方法。

雅思写作剖析： 减少重复 例1

错： Some people violate traffic regulations and they should be punished in some ways. For example, they must pay some money.

上文例句中，they一词反复出现，不但使得句子变得冗长而累赘，也使的句子间的逻辑和衔接变得松散。

改变思维模式：

Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished in some ways. For instance they are required to pay the fine. 例2

错： Unfortunately, it has also caused some problems we never thought of. When we are faced with these problems, should we carry on the practice? 此例句中，we 一次被反复提及，同样也使得句子显得累赘，同时句子结构看似也非常单一。 可修改为：

Unfortunately, it has also caused some problems which never been thought of. When faced with the dilemma, should we carry on the practice?

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