读后续写
方法技巧
故事要鬧绕主要人物展开。 详细刻画人物角色及其情感。
读后续写
五步写作法
牯分标准上
高分手段写作步骤有效使用连接成分，结构紧凑。
运用丰富的词汇、语法结构和修辞使描写生动。 第一段和第二段的内客衔接自然，逻辑合理通顺。
续写内容与 『给短文融洽度高，语言风格保持一致，思想积极上环境描写 肖像描写
增加加节
动作描写
语言描写 心理描写
营造冲突物和人物之间的冲突
人物和坏境之间的冲突
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非谓语动
词 with复合结构
升格语言
双形客词作状语
特殊句式 虛拟语气 常用修辞
f stepl浏览所给信息，确定大意主题一落点 J
Step2梳理已知段落，确定主要情节一重点
借助段落开头，确定续写内容一突破点
Step4刻画细节冲突，优美连表达一亮点 Step5做到首尾呼应，结构完整合理一基本点
情节设计要符合生活实际和文章逻辑，避免太过离奇。
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叙述力求精炼、生动、连贯、对话不要太多、书面化的长 句不宜太多。
五步写作法流程示例
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Ja ne and her husband, Tom, had drive n three hours to camp over night by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Ja ne was so angry that she said to Tom, “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time・ After she had climbed to a high
place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake・ To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top・ She suddenly realized that she was lost.
\"Tom!\" she cried. “Help!\"
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but
the farther she walked, the more confused she became・ As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night・ Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him・
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling （滴落）
somewhere at a dista nee. Quickly she followed the sou nd to a stream ・ To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes・ She drank and ate a few berries・ Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling str on ger now, Jane bega n to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake・
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me?
Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above・ A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead .Jane took off her yellow blouse, thin king that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
But no more helicopters came and it was dark. _______________________________________________ It was daybreak when Jane woke up. __________________________________________________________
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:L浏览所给信息，确定大意主题
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who what Jan ejom Jane was lost where In a forest when One weekend in July why A quarrel with Tom,her husband Jane was lost in the forest for three days and survived in the end 文章大意 表达主题 Jane learned how to control emotions and deal with conflicts 2.
梳理已知段落，确定主要情节
begin ning •••started to quarrel •••was lost •••kept moving-**had to stop for the night… 主要情节 developme nt Rose at the break of day* Began to walk along the stream and hope… climax（高潮） ending heard a helicopter 待定 3.
借助段落开头，确定续写内容
Para.l But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. 研读续写段落的开头语 （切入点）Jane是如何熬过这 个夜晚的？ 1. How did Jane feel then? 2. How did Jane struggle through the night? 3. Did she fall asleep and what did she think of? 3
Para.2 It was daybreak when Jane woke up? （切入点）昨晚Jane没有被 救，今天会发生什么？ 1. Was Jane rescued and who rescued Jane? 2. How was she rescued and how did she feel then? 续写内容 Para.l Jane是如何熬过那一夜晚的 Jane是如何获救的 Para.2 4• 刻画细节冲突，优美连贯表达 刻画细节冲突 添加细节 Jane在当晚和次口的动作，语言，心理描写以及对周［制坏境 的描写。 营造冲突 1. 扩大Jane在夜晚内心的冲突（后悔与丈夫吵架） 2. 渲染Jane当晚与次口与环境之间的冲突（当晚〃恶劣〃环 境与内心无助和恐惧的冲突；次口让直升机发现自己的困难 与渴望被救的冲突） 优美连贯表达
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again」n the dreadful darkness,① __________
（一切都像准备好发动攻击的野兽）［明喻+过去分词作定语］
② _________________________________________ （又累又怕）［双形容词作状语］,Jane was rooted to spot,unable to utter a word•\"③ ____________________________________________________________________
（如果我没有和汤姆吵架，我现在就不会被困在这里了）［虚拟语气］，” She thought of
herself® _________________________________________________ （后悔的泪水模糊了她
的眼睛）［with的复合结构］•⑤ __________________________________ （被恐惧包围着）［过去 分i司作状语］» Jane abandoned herself to despair and fell asleep・ “Tom, is
that you?
She murmured ・\"Tom, help!\" In her dream, ©.
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（她看见一位男士张开双臂）［现在分词作宾补Howards her at a distance.
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.⑦ _____________________ （尽管彳艮沮丧）［省
賂结构］, Jane decided to continue forcing her way ahead・ However, she found it
hard
to find a way out,⑧_________________________________________ （这再次让她绝望）
［定 语从右J ］・ Fortunately, a helicopter flew overhead just at that moment・ ⑨
________________________________________________ （Jane太激动了，她立刻冲到岩石
边）［倒装结构］and climbed onto it eagerly.⑩ ______
（眼里闪總着希塑的光芒）［独立主格结构］,she waved her yellow blouse madly to the
helicopter, （11）_____________________________ （大声呼救）［现在分词短语作伴随状
语 ］・To her grea t joy, the helicop ter spotted her and came to her help.
（12） ________________________________________ （当团聚的时候）［省略结构］,Jane and her husband hugged each other tightly in the warmth light of the rising sun. 5.做到首尾呼应，结构完整合理
提升点：为了做到首尾呼应，使文章结构更加完整，考生可以在第二段的结尾回扣文章开头
Jane与丈夫的争吵和冲突，充分体现本次经历后二人的感受。
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