2011专四作文预测冲刺

1. Directions: In modern society, more and more people have a part-time job. It is held that doing part-time jobs has advantages and disadvantages. What’s your opinion on part-time job? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: The Advantages and Disadvantages of Part-time Job.

【写作指导】

这是一篇论说文,要求就兼职工作的利与弊发表自己的观点。

第一段:引出兼职工作的利弊,并提出论点。

第二段:一一分析兼职工作的利弊。如兼职工作可以带来更多的收人,但还可以影响人们的工作精力等。

第三段:总结全文,提出兼职工作有利有弊。应该合理分配自己的精力,才能在各种工作中充分展现个人能力。

The Advantages and Disadvantages of Part-time Job

Nowadays, more and more people not only work as full-time employees but also have part-time jobs. Although working part time becomes popular, I think it has both advantages and disadvantages. (引出论点)

On the positive side, part-time job can bring extra income. (提出第一分论点,论述兼职工作可以带来更多的收人) Apart-time job is usually considered to be nothing but low-paid simple labor; however, in today's society, it can be specialized work, even better paid than a full-time job. Consequently, more and more people become wild in hunting for part-time jobs. Moreover, doing a part-time job can be pleasing, especially when it is something one is interested in. (第二分论点,进一步论述兼职工作的好处,提出如果兼职工作成为个人兴趣的话, 人们将会更加热爱自己的兼职工作 A company employee may become a part-time guitar player just because he is crazy about playing it. In this case, one will be inspired with

passion and take infinite pains to do the part-time job. Talking about the negative side, doing a part-time job can be energy-consuming, especially for those who are busy doing their full-time job. (第三分论点,提出兼职工作的弊端:兼职工作会影响到人的工作精力,会使人无法全心全意地投人到一项工作中) some people go to part-time work right after a busy day. That can be exhausting, so it is difficult for them to concentrate on their work.

In conclusion, doing a part-time job can be a double-edge sword. One should nicely balance himself between the full-time and the part-time one, so that he can take the good, avoid the bad and have his ability fully displayed in both fields. (总体概括并强调论点)

2.

Some Important Characteristics of a Good Colleague

In modern society, we spend a long time with our colleagues. As far as working class is concerned, a colleague's characteristic is sometimes crucial to a team's success. One may ask what kind of person people like to work with. I think there are three important characteristics for a competent colleague. (引出论点)

Firstly, a colleague should be cooperative. (提出第一分论点,提出一个好同事应该乐于与团队成员合作) In the company, one is expected to cooperate with other colleagues and contribute their efforts to the team. In other words, one should have the sense of cooperation during his or her work. Only in this way, one can be accepted by others and work with them happily. Secondly, a good colleague should be adaptable. 第二分论点,提出一个好同事应该可以适应不同的工作环境) One should not be stubborn to one point but seek to get accustomed to changes in routines. A good colleague should accommodate himself or herself to a new task easily and can therefore conquer the difficulties. In this way, one may get respect from his or her colleagues.

Thirdly, a good colleague should be helpful. (第三分论点,提出一个好同事应该乐于助人) He r she should always be ready to help others. Those who are too mean to give their help to others will not get others’ help either.

In general, a good colleague should be cooperative, adaptable and helpful. With those important characteristics, a person can develop well not only in his or her career, but also in his or her life. (总体概括并强调论点)

亮点词句

1. adaptable 原意为“适应性强的”，在这里意为“能适应不同类型的工作”。

2. be stubborn to 执着，在文章中表示一个好的通识不应该只把注意力集中在一件事上。

3. get accustomed to 习惯与某事，在文章中特之指学会适应不同情况。

4. accommodate oneself to使……适应

3.

【写作指导】

本题是一个对比选择型题目。要求就大学生住在校内与在校外租房孰好孰坏作出自己的评判。本题可结合实际生活形成两种思路:

思路一:住在校内好,原因在于可以与同学交流学习和思想,上学节省时间。

思路二:在校外租房好,原因在于时间比较自由,待人接物较方便,可以不受他人影响。

Living on Campus or Living Outside School?

Nowadays, choosing a right living place becomes an important issue for college students. Some of them prefer to live alone by renting a room near school, while others prefer to live with classmates on campus. As for me, I like to live with classmates in group dormitory on campus' (引出论点)

There are several vital reasons for my opinion. First, it's very convenient to ask classmates Questions about courses and have various discussions with them. (原因一:跟同学交流学习非常方便) The mail task of students is to achieve outstanding academic performance rather than anything else. Living on campus benefits not only me but also my classmates as we can help each other. Second, it can make me have better personal relations. (原因二:有助于建立良好的人际关系) It is not enough to communicate with classmates and friends just in classroom. Instead, we need see and talk to each other frequently in spare time so as to maintain friendship. Third, it can save me much time. (原因三:节省时间) Living outside school absolutely will cost me more time to go for classes and get back. Put all the wasted time together, that's really a considerable amount. With the saved time, I can study longer to improve my GPA. Meanwhile, I can also participate in more association activities in order to make new friends and enrich my school life.

In conclusion, living on campus is the best choice for college students. It can save them a lot of time to concentrate on study and establish better personal relations. Contrarily, living off campus would produce adverse impact and therefore should be avoided. (总体概括并强调论点)

亮点词句

1. nowadays, choosing a right living place becomes an important issue for college students.对大学生来说，选择一个合适的住处已成为一个重要问题。

2. the main task of students is to achieve outstanding academic performance rather than

anything else. 学生在校的首要任务就是取得优异的学习成绩，而非其它任何事情。

3. association activities 校内的社团活动

4. GPA 是grade point average 的缩写，指各科成绩的平均积分点。

4. Directions: As the rapid development of Chinese education, many students are under great burden in order to get into the door of university. Therefore, many of them pay too much attention to examination scores and neglect extracurricular activities. What's your opinion on extracurricular activities? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: The Importance of Extracurricular Activities

【写作指导】

这是一篇论说文,要求就课外活动的重要性发表自己的观点。典型的观点是:课外活动既可以丰富学生的业余生活,又可以拓展学生的世界观。

第一段:引出课外活动的问题,并提出论点。

第二段:给出课外活动为什么如此重要的原因。如课外活动可陶冶学生的情操等。

第三段:总结全文,提出课外活动的重要性。

The Importance of Extracurricular Activities

Under the heavy burden of proportion of students entering higher school, more and more schools pay too much attention to the score of their students, and ignore the cultivating of students' comprehensive ability. As a result, students are led to over-emphasize all kinds of examinations. My

idea is that extracurricular activities are crucial for one's growth. (引出论点)

First and foremost, extracurricular activity can widen students' point of view and broaden their mind. (提出第一分论点,论述课外活动可拓展学生视野的道理) through the attending of extracurricular activities, students will get to know different worlds and experience diversified fields which can help to enlarge students' eyesight and enrich their life. Moreover, extracurricular activities can help students develop different kinds of abilities, such as communication and cooperation capability. Secondly, extracurricular activities can help students get a deeper understand of the world they’re living in. (第二分论点, 指出课外活动可以使学生更好地了解世界) A student may take a simple understanding about affairs happened in the world. But the extracurricular activities can teach one not only a specialized skill, but also the overall consideration ability and therefore benefit the students a lot.

In general, the significance of extracurricular activities lies in the fact that they can enlarge students, scope of knowledge, broaden students' mind and help students get a deeper understanding of the world that they're living in. (总体概括并强调论点)

亮点词句

1. proportion of students entering higher education升学率

2. overall consideration ability 全面思考问题的能力

the significance of extracurricular activities lies in the fact that they can enlarge students’ scope of knowledge, broaden students’ mind and help students get a deeper understanding of the world that they ‘re living in 课外活动不仅可以扩大学生的知识面，还可以拓宽学社的视野，使学生更好地认识世界。

5. Directions: In China, most college students live in dormitories, usually with half a dozen students sharing a small room. Therefore, conflicts may occur sometimes. What should we do in order to live harmoniously in a dormitory? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Harmonious Dormitory Life in My Mind.

【写作指导】

本文属于典型的自由发挥作文。一般说来,应该从强调和谐的宿舍环境对大学生的重要性上出发,然后就如何创造和谐宿舍提出自己的建议,最后落脚到和谐的宿舍生活需要大家的共同努力。

第一段:对在校住宿的大学生来说,拥有一个温馨和谐的宿舍环境是至关重要的。

第二段:就如何营建自己心目中的和谐宿舍提出二至三条建议。

第三段:总结全文,指出一个和谐良好的宿舍氛围需要大家共同努力来营造。

Harmonious Dormitory Life in My Mind

A harmonious dormitory life is necessary and important to the students who live there. To learn how to get along with roommates is the first thing students have to deal with at college. In my opinion, an ideal and harmonious dormitory life could be achieved in the following ways. (综述和谐宿舍的重要性,点明题旨,并引出下文)

First and the most important point is to respect your roommates so that your doormats will respect you'(分论点一,应尊重室友) Be kind to each other and take care of them if they need. Doing this can help us to create a friendly and warm environment. Second, we have to learn to compromise'(分论点二,应学会妥协) For example, if you like to talk with friends, but your roommates want to study, take your friends out. Talk about your habits and ask your roommates about theirs. At last, we must learn

to communicate. (分论点三,应学会沟通) A dormitory is made up of people with differences in habits, character and background, so it is sometimes inevitable for them to run into conflicts. When misunderstanding occurs, we had better try to communicate with each other. Only in this way we can live together harmoniously. (用列举法描述自己心中的和谐宿舍生活并为此和谐的建立提出三点建议)

It can be concluded that a harmonious and warm dormitory life comes from all room members cooperation' only by respect, compromise and communication can we live a harmonious and happy dormitory life.（总结上文，和谐的宿舍生活需要大家的共同努力.）

亮点词句

I ' To learn to get along with roommates the first thing students have to deal with at college.学会如何和室友相处是大学生在学校里要处理的第一件事。

2' It can be concluded that a harmonious and warm dormitory life comes form all room members’ cooperation. 综上所述，一种和谐温馨的宿舍生活需要大家共同合作与努力来营造。

6.With the development of Chinese economy, more and more people like traveling. Some People like to travel with a companion, while others prefer to travel alone. Which one do you prefer? Write a composition of about 200 words to state your view.

【写作指导】

本题是一个对比选择型题目。要求就独自旅游还是结伴出游作出选择,并为此选择提 供充足理由。本题可发挥的空间很大,仁者见仁,智者见智,结合实际生活形成两种思路:

思路一:独自旅游,好处在于可以拥有更多的空间。

思路二:结伴出游,好处在于可以获得更多交流的乐趣。

The Benefit of Traveling with Friends

Nowadays more and more people become interested in traveling. Some people prefer to travel alone, while others prefer to go out with friends. Personally, I like to travel with friends. (引出论点)

Firstly, I can enjoy the pleasure of talking with a partner' (提出第一分论点,指出结伴出游可以享受畅谈的乐趣)On one hand' traveling with friends provides me opportunities to talk with them and also share my joy and grief with them. Friends, on the other hand, can also provide emotional support for me when we arrive in a new place. Secondly, traveling with friends enables me to get more safety on the road, for we could help each other when encountering troubles and accidents. (提出第二分论点,指出结伴出游可以在紧急情况时获得同伴的帮助,从而使旅游更加安全) For example, when I’m falling ill, I may get care from my friends, otherwise I will suffer more pain both physically and spiritually. Thirdly, traveling with friends is more economical. (提出第三分论点,指出结伴出游可以获得更多经济上的实惠The tour-group will often get more discount than that of a single traveler when visiting a famous tour site, having board and lodging in a hotel. Moreover, friends can also provide economic help if emergency occurs. For instance, if one loses his or her purse or they bring along with inadequate money, friends could always do them a favor.

Therefore, it’s easy for one to draw the conclusion that traveling with friends is better than going out alone. Traveling with friends can make the journey more funny and enjoyable. (总体概括并强调论点)

7. Directions: As can be seen, the employment situation I getting severe in China these years. When most students swarm into various job fairs, some just turn to set up their own business. Should newly graduated college students get to work or establish a business? What’s your opinion on this issue? Write a composition about 200 words on the following topic: Should Newly Graduated College

Students

Should Newly Graduated College students Get to Work or Establish a Business?

At present, career planning becomes a significant question for newly graduated college students. As a matter of act, most of them prefer to find a job in company, while others prefer to set up their own business. As for me, I would like to first work as an employee rather than risk my precious time to create a business.

Getting to work after graduation is absolutely better than establishing a business. First, newly graduated college students are far from possessing the necessary assets such as capital, technology, and public relations if they want to establish a business. Operating a business is a very comprehensive and complicated project. Many elements are required and any one of them may easily bring the business to a haul or even and end. Second, working as an employee can give students professional experience and practical capacities. What college students lack is not opportunity but superior ability? Even given an already profitable business, they can’t operate it well for absence of strong leadership and relevant experience. Thus, college students must first improve themselves by accumulating a lot of experience and leadership in jobs. Third, establishing a business is very risky, while a full-time job could guarantee a stable life. As mentioned above, a business needs a huge input of many elements. According to an authoritative survey, just five percent beginning entrepreneurs succeed at last. This is so risky that too few people can bear the burden of failure. However, a job can make people enjoy a regular and stable life.

In a word, it is better for newly graduated college students to find a job instead of rashly establishing a business. It is notable that working as an employee is less risky and could foster all kinds of abilities.

8. Direction: In recent years, more and more graduates choose to work abroad, while some

choose to stay at home. Every coin has two sides. What’s your opinion on graduate's workplace, home or abroad? Give reasons for your answer. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Working at Home or Abroad

【写作指导】

本题是一个对比选择型题目。要求就毕业生工作取向是出国还是留下作出选择,并为此选择提供充足理由。本题可结合实际生活形成两种思路:

思路一:出国,优势在于一些发达国家的科技水平比较高,给个人提供更高的发展空间,可选择性也大,各项设施的配备也较国内先进,更有利于个人的成功;但不好的地方在于,发达国家接收世界各国的高级人才,竞争激烈,工作压力大,生存成本高,如果没有足够的经济做后盾,很难生存。

思路二:留在国内,优势在于对周围的环境及生活习惯和工作方式比较熟悉,关系网比较广泛,做起工作比较得心应手,对国情比较了解,能随时应对一些变化,另外也便于照顾父母。劣势在于,国内有些设施环境与发达国家相比有差距。就个人而言,工资收人较低。

范文采用思路二,根据自己的实际情况,作为没有任何社会经验刚毕业的大学生,应该先在国内积累一定的社会经验再考虑出国发展。

第一段:引出大学生毕业后回何处发展的话题,明确表示愿意留在国内工作。

第二段:给出选择留在国内工作的理由并作出论证。

第三段:归纳并作进一步说明,指出作此选择所考虑的因素。

Working at Home or Abroad

When you graduate from college, perhaps you will be faced with the decision of your workplace, at home or go abroad? (引出论点) In fact, quite a few would deem that working abroad, but others, in contrast, believe working at home as the premier choice and that is also my point of view. According to my personality and I would prefer working at home rather than abroad. (表明自己的观点,并引出下文支持自己观点的理由)

There are three main reasons for my inclination to work at home. First of all, after years of study at university, I obtain much knowledge and skills, with which I can have little difficulty in finding a suitable job, and I am familiar with the circumstances, customs, method of work, all of which can help me work easily. In addition, at home there are many friends, schoolmates and relatives whom I can turn to help when in trouble. Another benefit is I understand the state of our country so I can respond the changing at any time. Finally, I won’t be too far from my parents, which is convenient for me to take care of them. (给出支持自己观点的三个理由，并做了论证))

In a word, my choice of working at home is based on my conditions ry capabilities, education background and social relations. (强调自己的观点,并指出自己在作出选择时所考虑的因素)

1. According to my personality and fondness, I would prefer working at home rather than abroad. 根据我个人的情况和爱好，我会选择留在国内而不是出国。

2. In addition, at home there are many friends, schoolmates and relatives whom I can turn to help when in trouble. 另外，在国内我有很多朋友，同学和亲戚，在我遇到困难时可以向他们求助。

3. In word, my choice of working at home is based on my conditions, my capabilities, education background and social relations. 总，我选择留在国内工作是依我个人的情况而定，我的个人能力，教育背景和社会关系都决定我留在国内发展。