专题01 活动与沟通-2021年高考英语应用文写作必备素材与核心句式集锦

2021年高考英语应用文写作必备素材与核心句式集锦01

活动与沟通

【真题再现1】

（2020.全国卷II）上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括: 1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受 注意:

1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 题目:My Weekend

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[参考范文]

My Weekend

Last weekend，we took part in a picking activity. We drove from the school, and the farm was about 2 kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals, green fresh vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided into two groups. One

group was responsible for picking fruits, the other packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was over. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it. Through this activity, we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is. We should treasure the food planted by the farmers. [写作分析]

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生为英语角写一篇关于和同学一起参加采摘活动的短文。 [写作过程] 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文。

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。 结构：总分法。 要求： 1.农场情况； 2.采摘过程； 3.个人感受

第二步：列提纲（重点短语）

took part in；was responsible for ；a meaningful day；should treasure 第三步：连词成句

1. Last weekend, we took part in a picking activity.

2. One group was responsible for picking fruits the other packed up the fruits. 3. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it

4. We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇

1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍农场；描述采摘过程；个人感受 2.表示并列补充关系：and ;But; Through 第五步：润色修改 [范文点评]

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如定语从句：But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it.；非谓语动词：We should treasure the food planted by the farmers；时间状语从句：When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals, green fresh vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided into two groups…等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。

【真题再现2】

（2016年，天津卷）假设你是某高中的学生会李华。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿:

① 回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)； ① 谈谈收获或感想； ① 表达祝愿与期望。 注意：① 词数不少于100；

① 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。 Dear friends，

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Thank you. [参考范文] Dear friends，

How time flies！Two weeks went by, and our exchange activities ended. On behalf of my school, I would like to express my feelings.

As scheduled, we participated in several instructive activities. We learnt many Chinese characters and took plenty of exercise together. We went to the restaurant to taste the Chinese traditional food. The food was very delicious. While visiting the art exhibition, we discussed the great artists’ works.

In my opinion, everyone here is a member of our big family and we learn a lot from each other. And at last I sincerely wish you a pleasant trip back to your country. I hope we’ll get together again next year. Thank you. [写作分析]

这是一篇发言稿，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面涵盖，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法句型使文章更有文采。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。

[范文点评]

这篇作文属于典型的提纲类作文。范文流畅，使用了高级句型：定语从句As scheduled；状语从句的省略While visiting the art exhibition；短语on behalf of；participate in；get together也为文章添彩不少。

【经典演练】

假如你是学生会学习部的李华，请你就学生会即将开展的“英语角”活动写 一篇发言稿，内容包括： 1.活动目的 2.活动时间 3.活动要求

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [高分范文] Boys and girls,

I am honored to tell you a piece of good news here.

In order to develop our interest in learning English, our Students' Union will set up an ”English Corner\"，which can improve our speaking and listening. The time is from5:30 to 6:20 on every Wednesday afternoon. Our foreign teachers will be invited to take part , who are to bring many interesting topics. Through communicating with foreign teachers, we can be more aware of the culture and customs of the English-speaking countries. By the way, whoever is willing to join is supposed to prepare at least one question ahead to ask, and bring your notebooks so as to make notes.

That's all. Thanks for listening.

[句子改写]用so that改写范文划线的句子

Our Students' Union will set up an”English Corner\ and listening so that we can develop our interest in learning English. [佳句临摹]

佳句1:Our foreign teachers will be invited to take part, who are to bring many interesting topics.

临摹1:欢迎大家积极参加这次英语演讲比赛，这将会对你们提高英语口语有帮助。

Welcome to take part in the English speech contest, which is to help you improve your spoken English.

佳句2:By the way, whoever is willing to join is supposed to prepare at least one question ahead to ask, and bring your notebooks so as to make notes. 临摹2:我们应该帮助那些需要帮助的人。

We are supposed to offer help to whoever needs help.

【写作宝典】

I.表示“起”的词语：用于开篇引出扩展句 at first 最初

to begin/start with首先，第一 first(ly)第一

First of all首先，第一 in the first place首先，第一 in the beginning起初

at present现在，当今 currently目前，当前 recently/lately最近 presently现在,此刻 nowadays现在

in general通常,大体上，总的说来 in recent years 近年来 generally speaking一般来说 the former.. the latter...前.....后..... for one thing. .. for another...首.....其. .....

on the one hand... on the other hand...一方面.....另一方面..... II.其他关联词

表递进：besides， what’s more， what’s worse， furthermore， in addition to等 表并列:also， as well(as)， or， either... or， neither... nor， not only... but also， both... and等

表因果: therefore，thanks to，as a result(of)，because of，due to，owing to等 表强调: above all，indeed，surely，certainly，of course，at least，obviously等 表解释: that is to say，in other words， believe it or not，to tell you the truth等 表比较: just as， just like， in the same way， similarly， instead等

表空间: on the left/right， to the left/right of， on one side of... on the other side of...， at the foot/top/end of， in the middle/centre of等

表时间: at first, in the beginning, next, then, later，about two months later，after a while，soon，soon after that，after that，afterwards，since then, meanwhile, in the end, at last，finally，for the first time, the next moment, up to now, before long，from then on，sooner or later等

表转折或对比: however，on the other hand，on the contrary，in spite of, after all，in fact，as a matter of fact等

表列举: for one thing... and for another (thing); first(ly)，second(ly)，third(ly)， finally/ last but not least(最后但同等重要的)等

表举例: for example/instance, take... for example, such as, as follows, and so on等 表总结: in short，in a word，in conclusion, in brief，generally speaking， to sum up，all in all等

【素材集锦】

[常用词语] 1.会议/报告类短语

go in for sports喜欢体育运动

arrange for sb. to do sth, 安排某人做某事 hold a sports meeting开运动会 attend a leeture/ report听讲座、报告 hold the opening ceremony举行开幕式 be present at a meeting出席会议 2.假期外出类短语

carry out a study开展一项研究 go camping去野营

hold a debate 举行辩论会 go for a picnic去野餐 make a speech做演讲 go sightseeing去观光 3.体育运动类短语 go hiking徒步旅行

enter for a competition报名参加比赛 go on a trip旅游

get/win first prize赢得一等奖 go outing去郊游

go all out to do sth.全力以赴做某事 [常用句子]

1. There will be a speech contest on our school playground this Saturday whose theme is \"I have a dream\".[there be句型/whose引导定语从句]

本周六在学校操场将举办一-场主题为\"I have a dream\"的演讲比赛。

2. There are various kinds of activities in our school, the most popular of which is table tennis.[“介词+ which”引导的定语从句]

在我们学校有各种各样的活动,其中最流行的是乒乓球运动。

3. As a student, you'd better choose the activities which interest you and suit you. 作为学生，你最好选择你感兴趣而且适合你的活动。

4. Please actively take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your school

life colorful, but also improve your learning.

请积极参加课外活动，这不仅使你的校园生活丰富多彩，而且还可以促进你的学习。 5. Riding bikes is certainly a good way for us to exercise and it is of benefit to our health. 骑自行车对我们来说无疑是一个锻炼的好办法,并且它益于健康。

6.In order to make our school life colorful and meaningful, our school has decided to organize a sports meeting.[make +n. (宾语) +adj. (宾补) ]

为了使我们的校园生活既丰富多彩又有意义,学校决定组织一场运动会。

7.Mr. Black, a professor from Yale, will give us a report on international situation, which everyone is supposed to attend.

来自耶鲁大学的Black教授将要给我们做关于国际局势的报告,每个人都应当去听。 8. Fascinated by the charming scenery, I was about to forget time when a thunder gave me a start.[过去分词短语作状语]

被迷人的美景所吸引,我几乎忘了时间，就在此时声雷响把我吓了一-跳。 9. We'll try our best to make your trip in Beijing a pleasant experience. 我们将尽力使你在北京的旅行成为-段愉快的经历。

10.I think it is a good chance for you to participate in the English Speaking Competition. 我认为参加英语演讲比赛对你来说是一一个好机会。

11. Our school will arrange for some top students to go to America for the summer camp. 我们学校将组织一些优秀的学生 到美国去参加夏令营。 12. What are you going to arrange for us during our stay in your city? 在我们待在你所在的城市期间，你将为我们安排一些什么活动呢? 13. We would like you to visit our school whenever it is convenient for you.

我们希望你在任何方便的时候来我们学校参观。

14. Did you have great fun spending your vacation in the countryside? 你是不是在乡村度过了一个非常愉快的假期?

15. A performance will be put on this evening to welcome the freshmen in our university. 为了欢迎我们大学里的新生，今晚将举行一场表演。

16. Currently, after- class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. 目前，课余活动在高中越来越流行。

17.I am writing to tell you what we have arranged for you.[what引导宾语从句] 我写信是要告诉你我们为你所作的安排。 18.I hope you can enjoy yourself here. 希望你在这里玩得开心。

19. I am wondering if you have made a definite plan for the coming summer holiday. 我想知道你是否为即将到来的暑假制订了明确的计划。

20. What amused us most was the wonderful short play performed by a group of little girls.[what引导主语从句]

最使我们欢乐的是一群小女孩所表演的短剧。

21. How time flew! It was getting dark before we realized it.[感叹句/before引导时间状语从句] 时光飞逝!不知不觉天黑了。

22. My parents and I are very pleased to have you with us. 有你和我们在一起 ,我的父母以及我都感到很高兴。 23. We will have abundant activities during the music week.

在音乐周期间，我们将有丰富多彩的活动。 24. Let's give a warm welcome to Professor Li. 让我们热烈欢迎李教授。